Hey!I wrote this poem for my best friend for her birthday!
this doesn't prove that am highly generic in giving gifts or that I am low on money just a way of saying thanx!
hope u people like it!
sometimes life doesn't go the way u want it 2 b,feel that all the bad things in the world are happening 2 me!:-(
i bang my head against the wall and it doesn't make me feel any better,they say the going is just getting tough n m at the end of my tether!
i oughta be working but i cant concentrate,Einstein ,Mendel atoms n electrons have left them all 2 fate...
i knew things would change,
my life's been better since the day u came!
whenever I hear ur name theres a smile on my face,
hope u know,now that smile never fades!
I really don't know n I wud never know y,
jus ur voice is enough for me 2 kick my troubles good bye!:-)
when i was 5 they told me there was no tooth fairy,when i became 7,there aint no santa claus!:O
Maybe there ain't no god above or below us...
But u changed my mind,
u made me realize angels like u do live with us!
u may look normal n may do seemingly normal things but for me ur my angel with dat supercute smile n no wings!:-)
theres a lot more i cud say,
when u make me feel this way!
guess I can never put into words wat ur 2 me,
without u i'd have misery for company...
jus 2 sum it up I cud say life loses its meaning without u ,
all i can say is I need u for the rest of my life!
7 comments:
Oh!
seems as if u are proposing the girl at the end..
ahem..ahem.. ??
hehehe..
all the best.. :P
heyaaa its just awesum
i hope the msg reaches to sumone whom u wanna tel her hw precious she is as a frnd!!!!
ur best frend is indeed superlucky.....!!!!
awesome poem...:)
quite touching poem!
accha hai!
i hope yer msg has reached to the person u wanted to send to!
Lovely poem! I didnt know u r soo talented!
Mmmm....2 b frank....ur start is good....d end is good toooo....but smwhere in the middle u loose it....I know u cud write much better....
A good try though....
Well...I hope whoever she is knows u treasure her...... :D
...hey dis is nice too.. n i am gonna pick it up n paste it for my angel... wid due credits to u ofcourse...
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